[master] 4bdf4ef8e Doc polish and grammar OCD.

Geoff Simmons geoff at uplex.de
Fri Mar 15 06:28:07 UTC 2019


commit 4bdf4ef8efa00d15a3347ce9c2081d5d00be2900
Author: Geoff Simmons <geoff at uplex.de>
Date:   Fri Mar 15 07:27:16 2019 +0100

    Doc polish and grammar OCD.

diff --git a/doc/sphinx/whats-new/changes-6.2.rst b/doc/sphinx/whats-new/changes-6.2.rst
index 98c91df0b..8da9bfd04 100644
--- a/doc/sphinx/whats-new/changes-6.2.rst
+++ b/doc/sphinx/whats-new/changes-6.2.rst
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ the flag is turned on, C sources and shared object libraries that were
 generated from VCL sources are retained in the Varnish working
 directory (see the notes about ``varnishtest`` below).
 
-For 32bit Platforms, we have increased the default
+For 32-bit platforms, we have increased the default
 :ref:`ref_param_workspace_backend` from 16k to 20k accommodate larger
 response headers which have become common.
 
@@ -212,10 +212,10 @@ varnishtest
 
 When :ref:`varnishtest(1)` is invoked with either of the ``-L`` or
 ``-l`` options to retain the temporary directory after tests, the
-``vcl_keep`` flag for the :ref:`ref_param_debug` is switched on (see
-`Parameters`_ above). This means that C sources and shared objects
-generated from VCL can also be inspected after a test. By default, the
-temporary directory is deleted after each test.
+``vcl_keep`` flag for the :ref:`ref_param_debug` parameter is switched
+on (see `Parameters`_ above). This means that C sources and shared
+objects generated from VCL can also be inspected after a test. By
+default, the temporary directory is deleted after each test.
 
 Since around the time of the last release, we have begun the project
 `VTest`_, which is adapted from :ref:`varnishtest(1)`, but is made
diff --git a/doc/sphinx/whats-new/upgrading-6.2.rst b/doc/sphinx/whats-new/upgrading-6.2.rst
index 011bd875a..5aaed3d42 100644
--- a/doc/sphinx/whats-new/upgrading-6.2.rst
+++ b/doc/sphinx/whats-new/upgrading-6.2.rst
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ changed and fields are now of dynamic width:
   ``Admin`` column has precedence.
 
 In the ``probe_message`` field of ``backend.list -j`` output, the
-``Probe`` and ``Health`` columns appears as the array ``[X, Y,
+``Probe`` and ``Health`` columns appear as the array ``[X, Y,
 health]``.
 
 See :ref:`varnish-cli(7)` for details.


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